Thanks to Indiana Jim, Douglas, Kara, and Scott for your suggestions on my romance subplot. They helped a lot. I now have a subplot outlined that I think will play very well. It includes…
Last week I promised myself to get through Chapter 20 in my revisions. This week I’m proud to report that I did. I’ve noticed my writing has noticeably improved over the first chapters I wrote and the points in which there have been story inconsistencies or character problems have been fewer than they were at the beginning of the novel.
Yeesh. I went into this revision process raring to go, and now I’m barely in the midst of Chapter 10 (out of 24) and am huffing and puffing. Well, Holly did say this was the hardest part, I suppose. But I need to set a goal.
I’m about to begin my revision of Vergence: The Last Rebellion. As I type this, my 401-page manuscript is printing out, one page at a time. I have only written 60,000 words, so those of you who have done this before can probably surmise that I am printing this with some pretty wide margins. 1.5 inches all the way around and double spaced, to be precise.
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