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		<title>Awesome Iron Man Costume!</title>
		<link>http://www.stormherald.com/2012/05/03/awesome-iron-man-costume/</link>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 03 May 2012 18:26:29 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Chris</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Everyone has got to watch this video!! Brilliant costume. 

A question though. Why isn't it fair that only one person has this costume and the guy with the camera doesn't? Maybe Camera Guy is just envious and protestations of 'fairness' has come to mean that. 

I am envious too. I fully admit it. :) Even I, who hates parading around in front of others, would walk around in this. 

Check out Anthony the costume maker's Youtube page here.]]></description>
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<p>Everyone has got to watch this!! Brilliant costume.</p>
<p>A question though. Why isn&#8217;t it fair that only one person has this costume and the guy with the camera doesn&#8217;t? Maybe Camera Guy is just envious and protestations of fairness have come to mean that.</p>
<p>I am envious too. I fully admit it. <img src='http://www.stormherald.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />  Even I, who hates parading around in front of others, would walk around in this.</p>
<p>Check out Anthony the costume maker&#8217;s <a href="http://www.youtube.com/user/anthonyle247">Youtube page</a> here.</p>
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		<title>You Can&#8217;t Go Back</title>
		<link>http://www.stormherald.com/2012/04/27/you-cant-go-back/</link>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 28 Apr 2012 01:17:17 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Chris</dc:creator>
				<category><![CDATA[Video Games]]></category>
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		<description><![CDATA[<p></p> <p>This thing tells the story that&#8217;s inherent in nearly all platforming video games using those kind of video game characters. I particularly love the handheld style which is used to impart emotion in several instances to great effect. Someone complained that the footage wasn&#8217;t screen-captured, but this video wouldn&#8217;t&#8217; be nearly as good if it [...]]]></description>
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<p>This thing tells the story that&#8217;s inherent in nearly all platforming video games using those kind of video game characters. I particularly love the handheld style which is used to impart emotion in several instances to great effect. Someone complained that the footage wasn&#8217;t screen-captured, but this video wouldn&#8217;t&#8217; be nearly as good if it had been.</p>
<p>Overall it&#8217;s an excellent example of the deeper themes that can be found in many otherwise &#8216;simple&#8217; stories.</p>
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		<title>Paperback Edition of &#8216;The Lightforce Rebellion&#8217; Now Available</title>
		<link>http://www.stormherald.com/2012/04/24/paperback-edition-of-the-lightforce-rebellion-now-available/</link>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 24 Apr 2012 05:21:50 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Chris</dc:creator>
				<category><![CDATA[The Lightforce Rebellion]]></category>
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		<description><![CDATA[I am proud to announce that the trade paperback edition of The Lightforce Rebellion is now available in the Stormherald store, on Amazon, and on Createspace for $12.99! This is a new, re-edited edition of the text that represents my final, final polish. (Yes, there's two finals in there on purpose.)

Buy it from this website by clicking here to get your very own autographed or personalized copy.

Read what others are saying about The Lightforce Rebellion:
"Being such an avid reader, I often run into the problem of being able to predict what is going to happen next in a book. With The Lightforce Rebellion, that was definitely not the case."
—Crissy, The Ink Puddle: Rated 5/5

"Christopher Walker is a good writer who has crafted problem a story that is fast paced. It has plot twists and character developments that keep you guessing what's going to happen next! You aren't sure who are the good guys or the bad guys until the very end."
—Amazon Review: Rated 5/5]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href="http://www.stormherald.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/eBookCover_kindle.jpg"><img class="alignleft size-medium wp-image-780" title="The Lightforce Rebellion" src="http://www.stormherald.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/eBookCover_kindle-194x300.jpg" alt="" width="194" height="300" /></a>I am proud to announce that the trade paperback edition of The Lightforce Rebellion <strong><a href="http://www.stormherald.com/store/#ecwid:category=2561887&amp;mode=product&amp;product=11237879">is now available in the Stormherald store</a></strong>, on Amazon, and on Createspace for <strong>$12.99</strong>! This is a new, re-edited edition of the text that represents my final, final polish. (Yes, there&#8217;s two finals in there on purpose.)</p>
<p><strong>Buy it</strong> from this website by <strong><a href="http://www.stormherald.com/store/#ecwid:category=2561887&amp;mode=product&amp;product=11237879">clicking here</a></strong> to get your very own autographed or personalized copy.</p>
<p><span style="text-decoration: underline;">Read what others are saying about The Lightforce Rebellion:</span><br />
<em>&#8220;Being such an avid reader, I often run into the problem of being able to predict what is going to happen next in a book. With The Lightforce Rebellion, that was definitely not the case.&#8221;<br />
</em>—Crissy, The Ink Puddle: <strong>Rated 5/5</strong></p>
<p><em>&#8220;Christopher Walker is a good writer who has crafted problem a story that is fast paced. It has plot twists and character developments that keep you guessing what&#8217;s going to happen next! You aren&#8217;t sure who are the good guys or the bad guys until the very end.&#8221;<br />
</em>—Amazon Review: <strong>Rated 5/5</strong></p>
<p><span style="text-decoration: underline;">Description:</span><br />
Zach Moran has never measured up. When he runs through a mysterious door in order to escape a bully, he unwittingly finds himself trapped in the strange, yet familiar world of Foronar. The thief Soren has stolen the teleportal device that Zach needs to return home, so he sets out to recover it with the help of his newfound friends Sid and Walter, and a beautiful girl—Erika.</p>
<p>But Erika has a dark secret of her own. She is Soren’s adopted daughter, tasked by the thief to lead Zach to him. For Zach is the key to Soren’s own designs. Designs fit for him, and him alone. Now Zach must conquer his fears, face death, and stop Soren… or remain trapped forever.</p>
<p><strong><a href="http://www.stormherald.com/store/#ecwid:category=2561887&amp;mode=product&amp;product=11237879">Buy The Lightforce Rebellion</a></strong> in trade paperback now!</p>
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		<title>Books that Inspired &#8211; Guest Post at Michell Plested&#8217;s Irreverent Muse</title>
		<link>http://www.stormherald.com/2012/04/21/books-that-inspired-guest-post-at-michell-plesteds-irreverent-muse/</link>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 22 Apr 2012 01:14:10 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Chris</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Michell Plested put the call out on Twitter a few weeks ago for guest posts involving the first books we read. I chose to write about just how much reading my first adult fiction novel changed my life for the better and led the way toward my learning how to deal with bullies in school. Click for the link to The Irreverent Muse where you can read the whole post.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Michell Plested put the call out on Twitter a few weeks ago for guest posts involving the first books we read. <a href="http://www.michellplested.com/irreverentmuse/guest-post-books-that-inspired-finding-new-horizons-by-christopher-walker/">I chose to write</a> about just how much reading my first adult fiction novel changed my life for the better and led the way toward my learning how to deal with bullies in school. Here&#8217;s a little sampling.</p>
<blockquote><p>I was a fairly dense kid while growing up. I wasn’t stupid. I easily managed A’s and B’s throughout school. I just wasn’t very aware of anything outside of my own immediate interests. I wasn’t aspiring to anything. I just ducked my head, hoping I’d make it to the next day, and missed out on lots of pop culture as a result. When my brother got me my first adult novel for Christmas when I was fourteen, I didn’t even notice that it was the last book in a series.</p>
<p>“Star Wars: X-wing: The Bacta War” ignited my love for space opera and fantasy. I felt like I could have been Corran Horn in another life&#8230;. I became obsessed with the movies&#8230;, then consumed the rest of the Bantam line of novels, starting with Timothy Zahn’s Thrawn trilogy&#8230;. Zahn got me to look beyond my own shell for the first time in my life at the actions and reactions of others&#8230;</p></blockquote>
<p>Check out the rest over on <a href="http://www.michellplested.com/irreverentmuse/guest-post-books-that-inspired-finding-new-horizons-by-christopher-walker/">The Irreverent Muse</a>!</p>
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		<title>Mike Daisey The Opportunist, Chris The Fool</title>
		<link>http://www.stormherald.com/2012/04/19/mike-daisey-the-opportunist-chris-the-fool/</link>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 19 Apr 2012 19:26:12 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Chris</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Okay, so I'm a little late to the party on this, but I think I need to say something because I perpetuated the problem a few months ago when I posted something about Mike Daisey and his story about labor abuses at Foxconn where Apple manufactures its products.

Turns out this story is false.

More or less.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href="http://mikedaiseyisaliar.tumblr.com/"><img class="alignright size-medium wp-image-967" title="Mike Daisy - Liar" src="http://www.stormherald.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/04/tumblr_m10j9iuJuj1rs0n9to1_500-300x200.jpg" alt="" width="300" height="200" /></a>Okay, so I&#8217;m a little late to the party on this, but I think I need to say something because I perpetuated the problem a few months ago when <a href="http://www.stormherald.com/2011/11/04/the-darker-side-of-apple/">I posted something</a> about Mike Daisey and his story about labor abuses at Foxconn where Apple manufactures its products.</p>
<p><a href="http://www.newyorker.com/online/blogs/newsdesk/2012/03/iphone-factories-chinese-dreams.html">Turns out this story is false.</a></p>
<p><a href="http://ca.news.yahoo.com/apple-gadget-maker-significant-labor-issues-audit-215038438.html">More or less.</a></p>
<p>I was right that Mike Daisey&#8217;s primary interest was in his play and not in the human rights abuses. That should have been my first clue. But who knew that his interest in his play was so overriding that he made the whole thing up? The idiot torched his career and made fools out of a bunch of people, including myself. And he may have done worse than that.</p>
<p>I was foolish because I thought he was actually telling a true story. He lied, plain and simple. And apparently it&#8217;s not enough anymore to trust that sources like This American Life and NPR will properly vet the stories they run, which is what I did.</p>
<p>The filters I set up to separate the BS from the truth failed me. And that&#8217;s my fault.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m usually very skeptical about sob stories about human rights abuses because I recognize what many self-proclaimed social justice types don&#8217;t; that cultures are different and it is not right to simply assume that the way our culture approaches work with its 40-hour work week, paid vacation and benefits, and weekends off is The Way Things Ought To Be Done. That doesn&#8217;t mean anything goes, but it doesn&#8217;t mean our way is the only moral way, either.</p>
<p>When Foxconn finally did bow to pressure and cut the hours of the workers, many of those same workers complained rather bitterly since that income was being sent to family back home. This reality just underscores the complexities created by the intersections of human rights issues with economies, cultures,  and the political and worldview shifts that affect those economies and cultures. And it shows that just treating the apparent problem&#8211;the apparent abuses themselves&#8211;is often only just treating a surface-level symptom. And treating those symptoms often exasperates the causes that makes those abuses possible. Now families in rural China are going to have less to live on thanks to us compassionate folks in the West. And in rural China, having less can be the difference between surviving a cold winter and not surviving at all.</p>
<p>Those long working hours are only symptomatic of a much larger problem in China. And it shows that how we all reacted was foolish and <strong><em>harmful</em></strong>.</p>
<p>Hopefully what this will do for a few of us is wake us up to the larger reality that simply <em>feeling good about the belief that we&#8217;ve helped others doesn&#8217;t mean we&#8217;re actually helping others.</em></p>
<p>But I think that for most people, what Mike Daisey has managed to do is make us a lot less likely to ever subscribe to this kind of thing ever again, even when a human rights abuse is legitimate. Congrats, Mike. Hope those ticket sales were worth it.</p>
<p><a href="http://www.thisamericanlife.org/radio-archives/episode/460/retraction">Listen to the retraction episode</a> of This American Life.</p>
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		<title>First Royalty Payment</title>
		<link>http://www.stormherald.com/2012/02/28/first-royalty-payment/</link>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 29 Feb 2012 03:13:12 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Chris</dc:creator>
				<category><![CDATA[The Lightforce Rebellion]]></category>
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		<description><![CDATA[I checked my e-mail before bed last night, and surprise of surprises, I received my first royalty payment! I'm so excited to actually be earning something from my book. So I went out and bought a pizza to celebrate.

Now my royalties weren't that much. Just over...]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p style="text-align: justify;"><a href="http://www.stormherald.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/eBookCover_kindle.jpg"><img class="size-medium wp-image-780 alignleft" title="The Lightforce Rebellion" src="http://www.stormherald.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/eBookCover_kindle-194x300.jpg" alt="" width="194" height="300" /></a>I checked my e-mail before bed last night, and surprise of surprises, I received my first royalty payment! I&#8217;m so excited to actually be earning something from my book. So I went out and bought a pizza to celebrate.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">Now my royalties weren&#8217;t that much. Just over $24; enough to buy the pizza. <img src='http://www.stormherald.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';)' class='wp-smiley' />  But they are still <em>royalties</em>. I&#8217;m not going to report every month on how much I earn, but I wanted to share my first time, because it&#8217;s just thrilling to see my hard work begin to pay off, and my writing career, well, <em>begin</em>.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">As to what&#8217;s been going on in my writing world, I <em>did </em>get <em>The Lightforce Rebellion </em>up on <a href="http://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/the-lightforce-rebellion-christopher-walker/1108242538?ean=2940033007219&amp;itm=1&amp;usri=the+lightforce+rebellion">Nook</a>, <a href="http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/125749">Smashwords</a>, and the Apple iBookstore. Just do a keyword search or click on the links in the previous sentence. I can&#8217;t link directly to it on the iBookstore, but you should find it easily enough. Of course, it is already available for <a href="amzn.to/lightforcerebellion">Kindle</a>.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">I&#8217;m also busy working on a print version of the novel, which I will be resuming as soon as I finish my church&#8217;s podcast this evening. I&#8217;m using inDesign to do the layout, so expect professional-level results. I&#8217;m looking forward to getting it finished!</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">Finally, I was the guest on the first episode of the QuestCast, a podcast that is recorded live on <a href="http://radio.mymiddle-earth.net/">Middle-Earth Network Radio</a>. It was a lot of fun and I hope to do it again sometime!</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;"><strong>Life in General: </strong> I&#8217;ve started the Dave Ramsey class! I&#8217;ve been following his advice for a few years, but I thought I should make it official and go through the actual class. I&#8217;m already learning some nuances of his financial methods that you don&#8217;t pick up listening to the daily podcast.<br />
<strong></strong><strong>Work: </strong>If you remember, I was working on earning a raise. Well, I earned it, but so did the entire company. So it doesn&#8217;t really count in my opinion. So I&#8217;m working on earning another raise!<br />
<strong>Exercise: </strong>I bought an elliptical, which creaks. I may have to call the service department and have them tighten up some of the screws I can&#8217;t get to without considerable effort being expended on buying a tool I will only use once; a 90-degree screwdriver.<br />
<strong>SW City and Active Worlds: </strong>Teh forum drama llamaz is still hurtin! It&#8217;s no longer entertaining. They got banned for a week, which was a blessing. But geez, they&#8217;re back at it again this week. I think we&#8217;re about 9 months into this nonsense, and I&#8217;m pretty sure the mods gave up a long time ago. Bad mods! Bad! It&#8217;s also put a damper on SW City. I think Ferruccio is the only person whose citizenship account is still active.  This will make the video scrapbook project of the city that I want to do all that much harder to complete, because I need my friends&#8217; accounts to be active in order to place virtual cameras into their scenes. I may have to resort to doing it like my <a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6pgaJ-c44Ak&amp;feature=player_embedded">SW City Revolution video</a>; virtually handheld. I would rather add some <a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=13q4a_U2_Ys&amp;feature=player_embedded">pizzazz</a>. <strong><br />
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		<title>Choices of One: A Review</title>
		<link>http://www.stormherald.com/2012/02/18/choices-of-one-a-review/</link>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 19 Feb 2012 02:18:18 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Chris</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[This review was written for the EU Review, which you can find here. 

Hello Nathan,

I thought I'd write in with a book review of Choices of One. I have stayed away from major spoilers here, which was challenging since the reason I liked this book was because of how Mr. Zahn handled his plot twists. What makes a good book for me is one that does well overall with both plot and characterization. If the characters are handled in such a way as to be believable, and if the plot has unexpected twists and turns in it, then it is a good book to me. If you have different expectations, then please keep that in mind.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p style="text-align: justify;"><a href="http://www.stormherald.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/08/choices-of-one.jpg"><img class="alignright size-medium wp-image-741" title="Choices of One" src="http://www.stormherald.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/08/choices-of-one-197x300.jpg" alt="" width="197" height="300" /></a>This review was written for the EU Review, which you can find <a href="http://www.solosound.net/category/eu-review/">here</a>.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">Hello Nathan,</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">I thought I&#8217;d write in with a book review of Choices of One. I have stayed away from major spoilers here, which was challenging since the reason I liked this book was because of how Mr. Zahn handled his plot twists. What makes a good book for me is one that does well overall with both plot and characterization. If the characters are handled in such a way as to be believable, and if the plot has unexpected twists and turns in it, then it is a good book to me. If you have different expectations, then please keep that in mind.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">First we will get to characterization. I really enjoyed Car&#8217;das&#8217;/Sorro&#8217;s motivations and characterization. It was handled very well. I also enjoyed Han and Leia&#8217;s relationship and how Han had to deal with not being in the inner circle of the Alliance when his friends were, perhaps because I&#8217;ve been in a few situations like that and it wasn&#8217;t very fun. Luke&#8217;s characterization was a bit off, in my opinion. Maybe a bit too milquetoast and naive for this point in his life, seeing as he&#8217;s relatively recently just blown up the Death Star and had his aunt and uncle murdered. I know what Zahn was going for; that of a kid in over his head and completely untrained in the ways of the Jedi, but I think he overdid it. However, the other characters in the novel make up for this oversight.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">What really impressed me though was how Zahn handled the plot arcs. One of the plots really had a Holmes-vs-Moriarty feel to it in some respects, though this isn&#8217;t readily apparent. I also enjoyed the twists and turns with Jade&#8217;s plot arc. It went exactly where I thought it would go&#8230; and then turned left. I love it when plots do that.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">Thrawn&#8217;s plot was the one that I was very impressed with because of a particular twist that I did not see coming. Mr. Zahn took a large risk with doing it the way he did because if the first few chapters didn&#8217;t do something for the reader that it was intended to do, it would fairly make the book less enjoyable as a result. In fact, because we&#8217;ve talked ahead of time about our different reactions to the novel, Nathan, I suspect that your realization of this twist in advance of where you were intended to realize it is what really killed the novel for you. But that twist is what made the novel for me. If anybody listening to this has already read it, you know what I&#8217;m talking about. If you haven&#8217;t, read the first chapter online or in the book store and see if you pick up what Thrawn is really up to. If you did, like Nathan did, then you may not enjoy the rest of the novel.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">For me, it was great. Definitely a must read. As a writer myself I really appreciate the craftsmanship Mr. Zahn put into this story and the guts he had to trust that his readers would enjoy the story in the way he told it. Whether he succeeded, I guess that&#8217;s a matter of opinion. But as as a reader, all I can say is that this novel is a really fun ride. Test drive the first chapter, then <a href="http://astore.amazon.com/chrissfavoriteinfluences-20/detail/0345511255">go buy it</a><img style="border: none !important; margin: 0px !important;" src="http://www.assoc-amazon.com/e/ir?t=stormheraldco-20&amp;l=as2&amp;o=1&amp;a=0345511255&amp;camp=217145&amp;creative=399381" alt="" width="1" height="1" border="0" />.</p>
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		<title>The Lightforce Rebellion</title>
		<link>http://www.stormherald.com/2011/12/25/the-lightforce-rebellion/</link>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 25 Dec 2011 18:41:01 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Chris</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[The Lightforce Rebellion is now available on Amazon's Kindle store! If you like young adult action/adventure, take a look at it, download the sample, and if you like what you see, please buy it. Once you've read the story, please also leave a review. Reviews help convince others to purchase the story. 

Here's the blurb:]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p style="text-align: justify;">The Lightforce Rebellion is now available on <a href="http://www.amazon.com/The-Lightforce-Rebellion-ebook/dp/B006PUS4SY/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&amp;qid=1324836927&amp;sr=8-1">Amazon&#8217;s Kindle store for $3.99</a>! If you like young adult action/adventure, take a look at it, download the sample, and if you like what you see, please buy it. Once you&#8217;ve read the story, please also leave a review. Reviews help convince others to purchase the story.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">Here&#8217;s the blurb:<a href="http://www.stormherald.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/eBookCover_kindle.jpg"><img class="alignright size-medium wp-image-780" title="The Lightforce Rebellion" src="http://www.stormherald.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/eBookCover_kindle-194x300.jpg" alt="" width="194" height="300" /></a></p>
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<p style="text-align: justify;">Zach Moran has never measured up. And when he runs through a mysterious door in order to escape a bully, he unwittingly finds himself trapped in the strange, yet familiar world of Foronar. The thief Soren has stolen the device that would allow Zach to travel back home. Now he sets out to recover it with the help of his newfound friends Sid and Walter, and a beautiful girl—Erika.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">But Erika has a dark secret of her own. She is Soren&#8217;s adopted daughter, tasked by the thief to lead Zach to him. For Zach is the key to Soren&#8217;s own designs. Designs fit for him, and him alone. Now Zach must conquer his fears, face death, and stop Soren&#8230; or remain trapped forever.</p>
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<p style="text-align: justify;">This is my first published novel, and the second one I&#8217;ve written. The story is up on Kindle right now, and soon it will be available online at Barnes &amp; Noble edition, the Apple iBook Store, Kobo, and Smashwords. Soon after that, there will be a print edition available on Amazon.com.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">Like all first-time-published authors, I&#8217;m proud and happy that I&#8217;ve managed to get something up. For me, I set the challenge for myself in March that I&#8217;d get a novel-sized story up online in time for Christmas. It would be fun to read and not suffer from most of the problems first-time novelists encounter and I managed to do it.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">For me, that&#8217;s big. And I wouldn&#8217;t have been as successful if not for my early readers Adam, Anthony, Andrew, Shanan, my parents Craig and Donna, along with Jennifer, Jeff, Laurie, and Brad whose suggestion for a cover artist ultimately led me to some great cover art. Thank you all.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">Over the next few months this site will be undergoing a redesign in order to move some things into the right places and to ultimately transform it into a proper author&#8217;s site.  In the meantime you can subscribe to my mailing list by clicking the proper link above.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays to everyone!</p>
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		<title>The Darker Side of Apple</title>
		<link>http://www.stormherald.com/2011/11/04/the-darker-side-of-apple/</link>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 05 Nov 2011 04:34:47 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Chris</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Watch this (link below the fold), then ask yourself, what are you going to do about it? Mike Daisy thinks he's found the answer. Upgrade your products less frequently until Apple makes Foxconn change its worker practices. 

Question for the audience; How many successful human rights campaigns have been waged on the premise of just taking advantage of the products of human abuse only 'less frequently'? 

Big. Fat. Zero. 

Mike Daisy is an actor, not an activist. His primary interest isn't in human rights. It's for his play. In a year he'll be on to the next one. But I'm okay with that. Here's why.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a title="The Darker Side of Apple" href="http://finance.yahoo.com/blogs/daily-ticker/darker-side-apple-human-cost-iproducts-164412176.html" target="_blank">Watch this</a>, then ask yourself, what are you going to do about it? Mike Daisy thinks he&#8217;s found the answer. Upgrade your products less frequently until Apple makes Foxconn change its worker practices.</p>
<p>Question for the audience; How many successful human rights campaigns have been waged on the premise of just taking advantage of the products of human abuse only &#8216;less frequently&#8217;?</p>
<p>Big. Fat. Zero.</p>
<p>Mike Daisy is an actor, not an activist. His primary interest isn&#8217;t in human rights. It&#8217;s for his play. In a year he&#8217;ll be on to the next one. But I&#8217;m okay with that, because the world needs people who will at least do <em>something</em> to bring attention to the moral evils in our world. Mike has a talent suited to doing so, and I welcome that he&#8217;s bringing attention to the labor issues at Foxconn. In fact, he&#8217;s the reason I&#8217;m posting this and spreading the word, because I care too. I just hope that he stops trying to have his cake and eat it too.</p>
<p>I would hate to stop upgrading my Apple iPod. I really love it. It&#8217;s an excellent productivity device. But perhaps it&#8217;s time to stop buying products made by Chinese factories that don&#8217;t treat their employees right. <img src='http://www.stormherald.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_sad.gif' alt=':(' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>Video Games and the Decline of Man</title>
		<link>http://www.stormherald.com/2011/10/05/video-games-and-the-decline-of-man/</link>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 06 Oct 2011 00:00:38 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Chris</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Today Colin Campbell from IGN posted a rebuttal to Bill Bennett's opinion piece on the "decline of man".

I would encourage you to read both pieces. Then come back here and read my response to Colin, which is below the fold.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p style="text-align: justify;"><a href="http://www.stormherald.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/10/videogames.jpg"><img class="alignright" title="I'm Being Eaten by Pac Man by Chris Pirillo" src="http://www.stormherald.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/10/videogames-225x300.jpg" alt="" width="225" height="300" /></a>Today Colin Campbell from IGN posted <a href="http://games.ign.com/articles/119/1198484p1.html">a rebuttal</a> to Bill Bennett&#8217;s <a href="http://www.cnn.com/2011/10/04/opinion/bennett-men-in-trouble/index.html?hpt=hp_c1">opinion piece</a> on the &#8220;decline of man&#8221;.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">I would encourage you to read both pieces. Then come back here and read my response to Colin.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">The worst kind of critics are those who don&#8217;t understand what one is talking about. In this Colin and I agree. But we probably disagree on most everything else because I don&#8217;t believe that Colin understands the argument that he has responded to.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">Bennett&#8217;s opinion piece does not place the blame on video games for the decline of men, or more accurately, mens&#8217; seeming-inability to take responsibility and grow up. While he does include stats about video game playing, they are clearly intended to be an example or symptom of this trend and not causes, exactly like every previous statistic Bennett cited before he got to video games. The examples he cites reference college degrees, employment, how many men get married and/or stick around to be there for their children, religious devotion, and an article on gender role reversal by Hanna Rosin from The Atlantic.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">Colin writes a poorly-considered and frankly petulant rebuttal that straw-mans Bennett&#8217;s entire thesis, presuming he is blaming video games and then mocking him for doing so without offering any real counterargument. And yet we would think it odd for Colin to come to the belief that Mr. Bennett blames universities for the decline of male responsibility. But that is exactly the sort of thing he assumes with video games, apparently just because they were mentioned in the article.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">Contributing to this misunderstanding is perhaps a misconstrued idea of what Mr. Bennett means by the &#8216;decline of the other sex.&#8217; He does not mean false notions of machismo or piety, nor does he refer to putting women back into the kitchen to make their husbands sandwiches and babies. Rather he refers to what makes man happiest; being productive, creative, and artistic at his chosen goal and disciplining himself to achieve those ends. After all, one will never create a video game if he never gets up off the couch and turns his console off. Rather, Mr. Bennett is talking about a balanced approach to life. One can enjoy video games and they can have their place in man&#8217;s life, but one must also discipline oneself enough to go out and&#8211;if it is their passion&#8211;make their own games. Men contribute productively to society by doing so, but so do they also when they are devoted to a family as much as to their own craft, refusing to let their children be raised by games and TV and other people but instead raising their children with the same values that made them productive and upstanding citizens without making the same mistakes as their own fathers did when raising them.</p>
<p style="text-align: justify;">Mr. Bennett&#8217;s blame for this observed decline rests squarely on other things than mere video games, as should be clear to anyone familiar with how argumentative writing works; the thesis is summarized, then supporting evidence is laid out to support that thesis. Then, only at the end, is the thesis justified and fully explained. His last five paragraphs, starting with the question &#8220;So what&#8217;s wrong?&#8221; are devoted to the real causes. Please read them.</p>
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